Love is everything.
Love is your family,
Your friends, your home,
Your hobbies, your looks.
This things are essential
For you to love, life
Is not life without
Affect for this things.
If you don't love
All this beautiful
Things, you can't
Have a life.
Love is life, life is love.
You´ve written an interesting and reflective poem. Good job!!
ResponderEliminarIn simple lines you express a lot and you close your poem with an epanolepsis, have you noticed?
In stanza 1 the phrase "your looks" confuses me a little bit, since it means the way you look, what clothes or style you are wearing. Is that what you meant?
Also, remember that the plural for "this" is "these".
An introduction is missing, in which you explain which of the three tasks you´ve chosen.
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