domingo, 22 de mayo de 2016

My home is my life

In literature we read poems. A poem which describes what you feel arriving your home, a poem describing how your parents met and fell in love and finally a poem which describes someone you really like.
I had to choose one of this poems and write my own version of the poem. I choosed the poem about home.
Here is my poem:




The sensation I feel before I 
enter my home is pure 
hapiness, I start thinking of all the
 things waiting for me, a nap,
television and other relaxing
things.


Once I cross the door I
feel all this hapiness,
my mother is awaiting me 
with love and snacks,
my father invites me to see a
movie, my brothers doing jokes
and fighting.


My home is my shelter, my
place to be free, my
everything.
My home is my life.














1 comentario:

  1. Great work Alan! You´ve even done some interesting work on rhyme in the first stanza. Good use of vocabulary and language!

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